Fire Falls
The fury of fire
Suns golden rays
Cascading life
Ending the days
Time sets the angle
A view from below
The suns inner core
Encased with a luminous glow
Solar show of energies giving life
Display incandescent rights
Free forming falling friends
Fire and Ice forming a blend
In the valley of Yosemite
There is nothing to hear but the majestic call
Where, and When you stand at the end of the day
A sense of wonder
As witness
To Horsetail Falls
Really good powerful descriptive words and phrases that produce a clear image. I enjoyed the alliteration in this line, "Free forming falling friends" but all of the stanzas have strong figurative language. Good work.
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